I aint sure why no one is replying. Maybe it's cause you're new or something. I dunno, folk always keep me out of the loop.

Anyway, this peace has a lot of basic mindset found in the mindset of nearly every poet. I get the feeling you're writing what you think you're supposed to right instead of what you really really NEED to write. I'm not saying this peice was bad, far from it. I just felt that it's the kind of thing all of us tend to write before we find who we really are. (And even then that search never truly stops.)

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.