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I liked it.
Exploring oneself and the world around him through writing. Kind of like exercising the 'pen' and finding different rythms(sp) in the process.
Yeah at times rhyme scene a bit rigid. And yes, at times a bit too elaborate and then not elaborate enough. Inconsistency.
But overall, a nice piece which i liked. And it was one of 'those' pieces.
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