this is a lil similar to donte allegheri's paradisio.almost a quick abreviation and fast generalization of his context.no accusation made.
poetic prose was a great structure to write this in and your vocab exsentuated each line and point.
also the ending was a phenominol twist like an acention from paradisio to inferno the body context is the purgatory-.
this is symbolic of divine comedy at its best very well composed indeed.much respect