Well i don't know as much as rhythmic, lol, can't rbeak it down that well, but ir ekon it was prti dope, couple of the lines reminded of the 50 cent 21 questions : i lvoe you like a fat kid love cake... These ones....
Believe me, this is just like a yearly flu
^haha nice

Make sure to it's pleasant, not something from a peasant
^ Froma peasent lol, good....

They reminded me off 50 cause his lines are funny, but get the point through....

Nice drop over-all and keep spittin dawg.....

Pce