lol@No Show...

Heres The Breakdown...
You Tell Me That Im Everything You Ever Wanted Or Wished For//
Damn, I Say Something, And Now You Steppin All Over Me Like I Was a Floor//
^That Was MAAAD Stretched... Work On Even Bars...

Also Get Rid Of The AA/BB Scheme... Try And Make It Something Like...
...A...A
...A...B
...B...B
Just Something More Complex And To Keep Flow At A High Point...

This Was Short... Should Write More To Express More Feelings And To Create More Of A Cresendo Effect Of Your Song...

Vocab - 7/10
Enjoyment - 7/10
Flow - 7/10
Topic - 6/10
Overall - 7/10

Work On It...

-Thanks For The Reply As Well