this coulda been a real nice drop if it was longer...
For a short drop it was nice, got the idea/concept through to me

Flow: Flowed nicely, nothin I had to try and keep re-reading...8.5/10

Concept: Stayed with it, was good too...8/10

Wordplay/Vocab: Not much really here, nice a simple, which is also good...nice vocab though...7/10

Overall: 8/10, nice drop

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