This was an excellent peice. I enjoyed Reading It. I loved the Topic. Very Good. Stayed on it of course. I liked the Use Of 3 people and 2 of them Rapping. Vocab was low, but i dont really think you were trying to do anything with vocab anyways. Flow, Good, Fell off at some points........Wordplay, Not really needed in here, so wont do anything for that. Creativity, Good becuz the topic was nice.
Overall Score= 8/10

Nice Job Dunny!
lol

im out....