i like. i agree with BMack cause my fav. part about it was was how you described the angels. it gave nice imagery to make it seem more real. also liked the "i fall and taste blood" line. cause that just set up the downfall.

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""Accustomed to trample on the rights of others, you have lost the genius of your own independence and become the fit subjects of the first cunning tyrant who rises among you." --Abraham Lincoln, speech, September 11, 1858