Very Nice Peice. I Liked The Flow.....Short and To The Point. Vocab......Great.....Not To many Big words, But Who Needs em? Your Work Makes Me Want To Keep Reading. Half Of These Kids In Here I Read The First Line and i dont bother to read the rest. I liked the Topic........Title is eye catching. Nice Peice. Hope to read more from you.

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