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Old 07-29-03, 06:11 PM   #5
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not bad not bad// but u have some faults in there as well like structure and flow// some not all of ur rhymez werent that great like dagger and matter// wtf//

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"U'r far from good, more like an elemental disaster-who gets ripped up-like tornoado's through thin plaster...
bitch u'r ass is grass, no i won't pass the flask-won't let u drink away the pain-it'll commense on u fast...
u'r a piece of trash, i'll simply throw away-minus the intelligence-till u grow a brain....

That was horrible usin pussy rhymes as such but other then that nice spit (no hate) ill spit in like 3 minutes
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