Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
From: Cottage Grove, Oregon |
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IP:
Hm... you generally have very well written material and this is no exception. The emotions conveyed were heart hurting at the core. And the thoughts gave one of a split dicision that had to be made.
I guess your in a bad situation with your parents. Never having parents, I can't really relate to it. So I'm not really feeling this peice as much as possible. But the talent you've displayed and display is still there and apparent.
~Shalom~
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