Rhyming/Flow
Was Kinda Weak, I Found However, In Some PLaces It Was O.k, But Theres A Differance FRom O.k n' Tight, And You need To Work On It To get It To That Level, You KNow? 4/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Not Alot To Say here. You Really Need To EXpand It, It was Wack. Also, Don't Abbv. Words LIke "u", "2" etc.. You The proper Spelling "You, Too"..Using Abbv. Like That Is Newbish!...3/10

Concept/Topic
Hated The Concept, However Some PLaces We're Pretty Funny..But You SHould Rap About Something More Close To Home..You KNow...3/10

Overall
3/10 ..... Was Weak, Work On Your VOcab n' Pick A Deeper Topic. Was O.k For A Comedy Type Piece...Keep Elevatin'

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