Dirty bitches can be found in all directions/
Always standin on corners ready to fuck and inject us men wit STD infections/
I hate wen girlfriends keep dishin out questions/! Fuck shut up, Ya need to start undressin and teach this bad boy a lesson/
Rubbin yo pussies got yo attention ands filled u wit sexual tension/ so put yo ass in my lap and fuck this erection/
Quit callin me on the phone/ yous a dog bitch now that trick I taught u where ya eat this bone/
Pleasure this king off while i sit on my thrown and If ya let me blow all over your cones then mabe ill consider answerin my phone/ until then bitch leave a message after the tone/
What kinda girls do u look for?/ ones that move frum the bed to the floor den wen u done with them u kick they ass out the door/ your tipical corner standin whore or the kind that'll letchu eat 'em out rite to the core/?
Back they go to be pimped n sold infront of the corner store/
Standin funny cuz they pussy still sore/
One sucked me and 4 other guys dry till everydrop of Cum was no more like it wuz her chore/ cept wit no allowence
Slapped her wit our cocks, all Four/ And its not everyday a bitch allows a man to have their asshole torn/
Me personaly perfer them girls who are Foreign/
horny as fuck and always wet,
Thank God im wearin rubber cuz this pussies pourin/
ATTENTION! ALWAYS were a condom no matter the situation/
or 9 months later you'll be the father of a kid u dont want, Congradulations/!!
Now your married and ur moneys down the drain frum the kid ur one night stand carried/
Dont let it happen so make sure yo jimmied up before Tappin/


Or else your trapped for life man//.....................

Rhyming/Flow
Was Kinda Weak, I Found However, In Some PLaces It Was O.k, But Theres A Differance FRom O.k n' Tight, And You need To Work On It To get It To That Level, You KNow? 4/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Not Alot To Say here. You Really Need To EXpand It, It was Wack. Also, Don't Abbv. Words LIke "u", "2" etc.. You The proper Spelling "You, Too"..Using Abbv. Like That Is Newbish!...3/10

Concept/Topic
Hated The Concept, However Some PLaces We're Pretty Funny..But You SHould Rap About Something More Close To Home..You KNow...3/10

Overall
3/10 ..... Was Weak, Work On Your VOcab n' Pick A Deeper Topic. Was O.k For A Comedy Type Piece...Keep Elevatin'

Word!

Yea i know Im shit at freestyles i did this in 2 secs

But can ya peep this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69865

^^suk'd.....flo~moved like mud tryna travel bak up a hill'

open'mics all bout flo~n u had none here....