Ehhhh, it would sound better in audio, im not really feeling the whole "Im a gangster" thing over the internet, but this was decent, flowed pretty good as i read it, addlibs were funny, hook was blah - am i like 50, a wanksta <-- that was wack bro!

Rest of it was decent, made for an ok read, just need to get off the ganksta tip and you'll be a decent writer.