Frustration builds up as i rip the pages up ~
Sit with my head in my hands tears fill up
-these lines remind me of how i get when i'm on writers block..i love your imagery in this piece..although it seems basic....it comes off rather powerful..very good job on that effort.


Your piece reminds me of a very ironic story..you think somethin is gonna happen..then it takes a completely total twist....and something else happens...very nice..
i liked this..just always keep working..and never give up
God bless..1..