I wasn't feeling this one so much. Some of the rhyming on it seemed forced...

"remember when there was a storm and I walked 7 miles just ta make sure you were ok/
you called at 10 an I got there at 12 o clock/
tha next day/"

Like that part right there. I did like the emotion you put into it though. I like how you're handling the situation too. Even with all that stuff she did to you, you still hug her. It takes a lot of control to do something like that.

What you wrote here wasn't bad. It's just, the way you wrote about it made it hard for me to feel it. I guess, as long as you felt better after writing it, who cares what I think right? Keep postin them up