ok i cant poll vote but i will give you m feed back
amp: this is easily the best verse ive ever seen from you, some real nice punches laced in with some newbish punches but hey r still prety new to this
Mic: chnage your format...dont do this//anymore in//paragraph form cuz its// much harder// then reading it like this//
this is how you should//
do it from now on cuz its//
much much easier to read//
and it makes you look sless gay//
plus you had no solid punches in there so
vote: Amp