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Old 08-03-03, 05:44 PM   #5
A2Z
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ok i cant poll vote but i will give you m feed back

amp: this is easily the best verse ive ever seen from you, some real nice punches laced in with some newbish punches but hey r still prety new to this

Mic: chnage your format...dont do this//anymore in//paragraph form cuz its// much harder// then reading it like this//

this is how you should//
do it from now on cuz its//
much much easier to read//
and it makes you look sless gay//

plus you had no solid punches in there so

vote: Amp