Rhyming/Flow
The Flow Was Good, NOt The Best I've Seen You Do..I KNow Your Capable Of Better, But Even So It Was Pretty Good...7/10

Vocab/Wordplay
You used A Good Array Of Words To Express The True Meaning Behind This Rather Morbid (lol) Topic. Good Wordplay In A lot Of places, So This Isn’t Something You need To Work On As You’ve Already Captured It...8/10

Concept/Topic
Nice Topic, You Played It out Well, Covered Alot of Aspects Of it: "Love, Hurt, Abide" etc... Nice...8/10

Overall
8/10, I Liked The Way You Had It Structured, The "Important" word If You Will, At The Beginning Of Each Bar, Was Really Hittin', Help Me Take Notice Of it.

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