Thread: Chelsea?!
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Old 08-12-03, 07:09 PM   #7
varentao
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Rigid, akward and slow. The meaning diluted by all that.

Nonetheless, at times i saw cracks of 'sunshine'. i.e. good writing.

But i dunno. If it was personal, then fair enough. But nah, it just wasn't written well enough to communicate to the reader quite as well as it could've been.

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