Where to start ah yes the poem(ha), very good and i liked it, the cristal line made me smile definently. The vocabulary was basic but it didn't need anything more it is what it is. the subject matter is a sensitive one with me and i respect your opinions and will leave it at that. Thank you for the experience.

and converted water into cristaaalll.../
he was perfect to a ten with no flaw...//-still smiling!!!!!