At first I thought this was one of those "feeling" peices. Y'know? "This is what I'm feeling, here it is". But then at the end it had one of those, for lack of a better term, "trubrownangel"ish twist endings. I didn't see it coming and it was the worst/saddest possible outcome.

What I really liked was that the whole peice was just so natural. It's just word after word and line after line exactly the way it should be. I don't know if you spent a long time crafting it percise, or just sat down and it flowed out, but it sure came out awe inspiring.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.