I could really relate to the first line. But only because when I read it, the cold black soda pop was caressing my tongue at the time. Which is sort of similiar.

Actually, I dunno if you intended it or not, but I had a real vivid image of what was going on in your peice. I felt like you were describing yourself being locked in a coffin that got shot into space. Y'know, entirely black and completly in bondage. I dunno, that's just what I got out of it. You wrote some good stuff there either way.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.