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Old 08-21-03, 12:49 AM   #7
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The alliterations in some parts was nice...The difficulty level didn't seem to high for the fact that you spaced so many words but none the less it's alot better than the previous work i've viewed from you...



i'm an assasin assaulting ambitions and asperations
born brawn, blazen bazooka bombs n blood bathin
chasin celestial collages, clonin cerebral cells
destin to desolve diaphragms and display the details
easily escaping earth, extreme elevation embrassed
fuckin faggots can forget a future filled with flames
gratifying gods ghosts, glowin' in gardens
hells heads hung high heroic but heartless
intinsify initial insight in illiterate i's(eyes)
judged by jury's asa juvi my journeys justified
a kleptnomaniac killing wit keen kinetics
left ligaments lacerated, ya lost ya leverage
Master of mass massacaers n murdering menators
a necromancer navigating narcotics n-the-north
an obscene omen birthing ominous offspring
preventing poor preformance with Perfection pausing-
ya'll queer as quadroople quanity's of drag queens-
rabid rotation of races rampaged in rap reads-
suplexin shadows severin several sides n sections
terminating testicles n teats wit tentacles every time i'm textin-
utopia-vs-universe ultimately undergoing war but unscathed
vacuming verses, vonerable yet visiously vague
warming up warheads, in water we wait n wade-
x-it x-ceptance, x-terminate foes, no x-cape

Sorry, i'm bored...At least you inspired me tho...

Stay up and keep elevating..1ne
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