this was good, it was easy to read, flow was there, and i got the message sharp and clear didnt have to reread it again to try to see where you were coing from. this topic almost everyone can relate to so you gotta try hard to put something in it they didnt think of before something to make them think about it all over again. Nice post, keep the poems coming u certanily got some talent for it, try using some other set ups other then aabb, i'll be watching for the next one. peace

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