baby girl, nice piece. Definitely if it's your first love poem... believe me, just keep on dropping stuff like that, cuz I loved this.
Great flow and full of emotions.

"We are spending more time alone, than we are together
It almost seems like we havent hugged or kissed in forever
Even when im lying next to you, I feel like im across the sea
Our love is no longer there, and thats become clear to me"

That was my fav line, especially cuz I can relate to that and have been in more likely the same situation.
Keep speaking straight from the heart.

peace