"Battle Royal" was decent, the punchlines weren't very hard at all, although your delivery wasn't that bad, but work on that emotion a little bit more.. Even though you have that aspect somewhat down, always need some improvement, of course. Although, I enjoyed "Not Like This" more, because it was a full length track and I was hearing out the concept, hit home, family.. The end was dramatic, as well.. When you were completing suicide, pretty insane.. >> I give it to you for the SECOND track, first one that I listened was eh, na'mean? Keep elevating upon your word..