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Old 08-24-03, 11:28 AM   #2
Split-eyez
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Nice drop, seriously. I felt it. I've been through the same situation, with my baby girl breaking up and me finding a way of getting her back. This was heartfelt poetry and I was really feeling it. Emotions are the main thing in poetry and I really didn't care if some words rhymed or didn't. This was a nice read and definitely something that showed your real emotions.
Keep dropping and keep speaking straight from the heart.
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