well i aint to fond of the love poems cuz she is but a harsh mistress who has always let me down....so i dont hang wit her no more....

but back to your piece...

fav lines-You no longer kiss my cheeks and hold me close to you
And I no longer feel like our love is pure and true
your eyes seem distant now, you seem so far away

can i tell you how many times ive said this o have heard this? it really hits home so I think that you have got some good shit here....ima say 8/10 i just wish it would be longer.....

FUCK LOVE but nice drop