this piece here i dont know what much to say about it, its pretty self explanatory, the flow does fall off in some spots but its not at all bad, your vocab was pretty good. I dont remember seeing any of yur other pieces but ima look tem up now cause i guess this ones so different.

I believe I was the devils design/
2be-able 2 cope with pain/
Yet not allowing 1’s self 2 contain/
A shred of happiness/

i liked this part, it might not have been the best four lines in your piece but they are the four lines that stood out to me, the lines i'll remember from it.

anywho good piece all and all, keep posting more i'll be watching for them.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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