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Originally posted by ~Soultress~
The flow really put me off a little in this piece
It didn't seem to match up...iunno maybe it
was the way I was reading it...but it made
it hard to concentrate cause I had to keep
going back over lines
But still..very emotional piece, deep in some parts
but you definately got your message out into words
stay up
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