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Old 08-31-03, 03:07 AM   #5
DeadlySilence
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Breakdown for Ya:

Flow-Mentally
Punches-BROOKLYN
Vocab-Both
Mulit-BROOKLYN
Enjoyability-Both
Creativness-BOTH
Funniess-Mentally
Structure-BROOKLYN

Overal-BROOKLYN

Personal Breakdowns:

Mentally

Best Lines:
Brooklyn: Please go easy on me, all my wins come from newbies, im not ready to face a vet.

Mentally Kursed: Its okay, i heard all dogs go to heaven

Brooklyn: So after you lyrically murder me ill be in heaven wit my puppy NaNa

That may not have been part of the spit but that was some pretty funny ass shit, I was laughing my ass off, I ahd to readjust before I read your rhyme. You got some skill, I personally don't prefer separating bars, looks bad but hey you can do whatever. Good verse but not good enough.

BROOKLYN

Best Line:
Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus
All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed

I loved the reference to an early teen movie. Bill and Ted's movies were cool. Nice use of historical movies to incooperate his rhymes into it, nice one. This was a pretty good verse. Once again it was pretty mcuh flawless, you have proven once again why you are the top on RB.


Props to both MC's for a awsome battle!

Oh and I am not a noob, so take this into account, I know what I am talking about, so deal with it.