BREAKDOWN
BROOKLYN
I'm Not Dissin Your Talkative Wackness But Your Missin The Thought In Rap
Thats Fine For Litter Cus Mental’s Used To Havin Tickets For Dropping Trash
You Ain't Real, It's Like You Plagiarize The Way You Have Fake Text
So I Put This Guy In A Headpiece Like Girls Who Have Safe Sex
Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus
All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed


thos are killas ^^^

How You Expect To Battle The #1 Out Of 9? Your Whole Rep Is To Straddle Guys
Plus You Got More Stretched Wordplay Than A Fifty Point Scrabble Line

not that great of a finisher.. i expected him to do a betta finisha cuz he's "the best" at rb.. no hate tho

MENTALLY KURSED

Brooklyn your a newbie, you applied to become a vet but was declined//
you placed your scrotums on a modem so your balls would be on line// (online)

my punches hit to the back knockin your vertebrae disks outta your spine//
head shoulders knees and toes chopped up, your body parts no longer connect or align//

your life is like a swish in bball, your career is nothin but net//
you work wit SARS for minor wage and your still not a major threat//

those are killas^^^

Brooklyn edits his verses to win, battles newbies for his rec//
Changed your font size to a smaller font so your flow doesnt seem stretched//

nice but not that great of a finisher...nice tho.. no hate doggs

vocab=both
punches=mental
flow=mental
metas=brook
structure=both
humor=mental(opening line was great)
creativity=both
enjoyability=both
vote=Mentally Kursed\

close ass battle tho... i expected brook to take it cuz he's the "top dogg" but whatever.. no hate no beef

im not polling...juss waitin fer the mods to fix the poll.. its suppose to b 1-0 cuz of the requirments

peace