i felt this, very nicely written, the flow and internals were there and kept concept going nicely, good imagery and emotion displayed, the hook was also a nice touch, the first verse was my fave of the three and you finished it off nicely at the end with the "no longer fallin for the bullshit your feding me" - i felt that. All in all a good piece, you'll make for a nice addition to the site, so welcome and props on this piece!

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