iight

i liked this here, it seems like something new, different then what ive seen you write before, but its nice.

the flow was good, it kinda seems like one of those soul reading ones ( not quiet sure what its called )

your vocab fit the piece, didnt try to put in big words that didnt fit, they all went nicely

the first line got me hooked it was a great opening line, and your ending was my favorite part, its not one that leaves you hanging like the door closed in front of your face, locked out from where you feel it should have gone

my love

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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