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Old 09-11-03, 11:00 PM   #2
Tourniquet
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What age is it when you become so depressin?
When your kids adolescent or are you born with resentment

^Really liked those lines.

The message was a little blurred to me here, I feel the anger and you are descriptive in the opening when describing the continuous ill feeling and arguments. My first thought was this is anger directed at your mother, but as I read on I wasnt so sure.
The ending was a little abrupt, seems unfinished a little.
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