Thread: yep yep yep,,,,,,HOMIE$ Home!!
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Old 09-14-03, 11:31 AM   #2
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i liked the vocab..but i think you should make you bars so we can read the flow much easier like this..

murder emcees without any commotions
watch they bodies go into convulsions

its easier to read the flow..it was there juz hard to pick up..
the structure seemed pretty tight..keep elavaten man...good drop
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