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murder emcees without any commotions, watch they bodies go into convulsions, gathering thoughts like a hurricane in the oceans, im made by potions, no words but i make conversations, eye contacts, no reservations, or contracts, look at my writings they all stay true, to warp ya brain till your lips turn blue, be the next on my list with the emcees who fail to my knowledge, that i spit on those what-cha-ma-call-its, its a mic, that i hold so tight, tighter than my spine and back, flows so gruesome ill give you a heart-attack, thats true talent best believe, i receive, challenges from masterpiece, emcees, but i scratch them off like fleas, Storms is growing strong, no matter how long, i havent posted or even criticized a song, my name is roaming but my face is ghost, i deserve a demo deal just watch me roast, this mic in my hand its hot and it sizzles, i continue to flow like rain or skittles(comercial), no turning back im here for good, im attracted to the mic like a beaver to wood, we inseparable like siamese twins, me and this machinery always contends, against emcees who think they'll win, not against Storms bitch guess again,

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i liked the vocab..but i think you should make you bars so we can read the flow much easier like this..

murder emcees without any commotions
watch they bodies go into convulsions

its easier to read the flow..it was there juz hard to pick up..
the structure seemed pretty tight..keep elavaten man...good drop

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set bars otherwise it annoying as fuck to read, pick a direction for your topic to go in because creativity goes a long way, add some multis as well for a better flow. vocab was pretty good though.

keep elavating.