hmm...what can i say not to shabby for your first try at a poetic view of writting losing someone is a difficult thing to go through but life involves things like this...i see this peice as a stepping stone to being able to show your feelings to people and that's why i enjoyed it i read inbetween the lines and tryed to feel the words to show your emotion to me and i liked being able to do that ....good job and keep it up

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