yo bossman ur shit for sayin that. he just sounds like a kid who wants to improve, and thats just gonna bring down his confidence. open mic is to help improve people not shoot em down like that. for a first post that was pretty damn good. yo kid u do need to work a little on the flow, and multis. like at said u cant force in ur rhymes, but that was pretty good for a newbie. keep elevatin and postin and youll do fine here.