Thread: Broken Dreams
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Old 09-22-03, 04:41 PM   #2
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iight

i can not relat to this straight on, ive never had a relationship where he has passed away, but i can relat in a different way. in a way where after you've broken up with some1, who was your whole life, and they change, in a bad way, the old friend you had died with the break up, they become a person, and you feel like they are gone forever, dead, and miss them greatly

even thou its not quiet the same, the poem could come across in different ways for different ppl, and i do here you.

its a pretty simple piece, not alot of detail, but enough, and i coudl feel emotion, but it could be my own emotion coming back thinking of the person i feel has long ago died now, that i miss ( and i feel so stupid saying that, but i do miss you ) and even if its my own emotion im feeling and not yours, thats still good cause then it was strong enough to stir up emotions in me that ive been trying to forget

lots of love

~Tera~
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