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Old 09-23-03, 08:34 PM   #3
Menik
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It was a pretty good peice, but try to even out your lines so it flows better, try using some more multies to support the flow, your wordplay was ok, overall it was a pretty good peice, and if you get the chance can you drop some feedback on Me and Gene Pools peice called "Nice Guys Finish Last" Thanks.
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