Very nice imagery/ wordplay, good rhyme scheme

nice start:

I'm just your average cat known to blast lyrical gats with grandly planned tactics,
only at whack mc's, hood rats and avid crack addicts that try beefin back at me.

nice flow to the whole thing too

Cant really think of criticisms due to fact that im a newbie and the difference in culture (UK US), EG: Because you from US i know shit bout ur culture

but cant fault the lyrical structure, wordplay etc, all good


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