aight... the subject was deep, and I liked it...
but your stucture was throwed and your flow was off an on at times.... your wordplay was ok, and your vocab was good...
overall it was a good peice, just keep on posting and try to even your bars dawg...
A.T.

can you hit up my post... heres the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81294