Thread: Seek Sleep
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Old 09-25-03, 01:09 PM   #4
Ha'aNe
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its extremely short & it was mad lackin of substance in the beginnin, but towards the end u did pull it out, nice emotion, flow was kinda fucked.. especially midway, but overall its not bad @ all

Not showing you too much in fear of rejection/
Looking at you puts up a stop sign at my hearts intersection/
Not knowing me but me knowing about you so deeply/
I want more dreams of you at night..So i seek sleep/

^ nicely done, thas my fav. part, its a great finish, good tie in with the title
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