Not a bad writing. Kind of simple. A topic like this that gets written about often could have had more to it, I thought. Parts of it didn't really go together..like you were trying to force a rhyme or something. I dunno what it was. That was only for a couple of the lines though. Most of it I liked. I felt what you were saying in it.

"Up all night plotting and planning of ways to speak/
To try and get your attention"

I'm in that situation right now so I smiled when I read those lines.

"Not showing you too much in fear of rejection/"

That line shows how I been in the past few days. I liked reading that one.

The more I read this, the more I liked it. Pretty good. Keep posting.