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Your flow was nice throughout..well don on that


I hate to be harsh but...i'm hating myself right now

The content was like BLAH...I mean people who have really hard times don't boast about it or express it when such a newb...well i wouldn't...try looking to expand your skills before dropping problems...I understand you may of used it as a vent for the anger..but it was all too played...And if this doens't happen to you and it was fiction...Just leave rap...

Giving you the benefit of the doubt...Your flow was nice just try getting some sort of topic