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Old 09-29-03, 02:14 AM   #3
The Necromancer
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You can only prod so long
Before I become aware of the pain

For some reason those lines reminded me of this:
http://somethingpositive.net/sp09242003.html

I can't find any other webcomics in which to relate this peice to, so I'll just go straight into the peice itself. Althought the entire One Over Zero comic was centered around the author trying not to procrastinate.

Anyfuckingway...First I gotta say, regular style be dammned. Just write whatever comes out. The more raw the more primordial emotions can be felt. Refinement is the tool of the industrialist, and poetry isn't known for being industrial.

Anyfuckingway...again...This was seriously all good. Up until the very last line. That totally threw me for a loop. Because it's the part I don't understand. A lil' explanation...?

But besides my inability to understand it, this peice was still great.

~Shalom~
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