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Old 09-29-03, 02:37 PM   #6
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necro..the last line of her poem....

theres no need to waste time trying to make
things work since he seems to be leading her
on as if shell be his forever...

thats not happenin..shes too good for that

im beter than robbie....yea thats right

this was an alright piece of poetry double t and
never switch your style..lemme rephrase...
like necro says..write whatever comes out as long
as its you doing you..like masturbation...

dont let others decide that way you portray poetry...
its the greatest form of expression ever..better than
picking up a weapon or taking your own life....do you
first n foremost...

im better than robbie...you deserve someone who
thinks your special...and can make you feel that way*
every female or male deserves that....

this wasnt bad by any means...
dont change for anyobdy but u....

la paz
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