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despair is something we all face at one time or another daoped
and i find that you edged this peice it could have been a long
drawn out peice that went on forever about our sorrows and tragedies and all teh pain and suffering in the world today and about how each one of us think we have it worse than anyone else
but thats not hte case in your peice
its simply a short
statement saying that you have dealt with it
and you can move on without making in NATIONAL news
i find this a very effective peice with a nice easy to read vibe in it
hazy
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