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damn G!

i mean it man.... damn G!

I said it twic just to be nice

damn G! I think i'll even say it thrice...

This man is obviously the real thing he paid the price....

Dude sume of the 2nd verse needs a tweak... What I find is sometimes i get ahead of myself and throw too many words into my lines as i go further into my flow.... now if that happens either you need to speed up or drop som of those excess words....feel me?

example:
"when your around your moms and girl you always pretend to act good"
you could change this to:
"when around your moms and girl jus pretendin to act good"
you is mad though so i assume you jusst flow faster n' tighter

keep it so fresh and so clean G

{Peace}.....

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